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This is a good story but there is some grammar errors and such so i cant give a 5 star but also just a note, she isnt a widow since her husband isnt dead she would be considered a divorcee while Dean can be considered one since his wife did die Overall good story keep it up! Try editing the novel when its done so it can be cleaned up (if you understand what i mean haha)

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Second Marriage: My Strongest Bodyguard

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by the way. I started fix it. thanks for the criticism and suggestions.