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Li_Yi_Wei
Li_Yi_WeiLv153yr
2021-05-06 17:20

This is a good story but there is some grammar errors and such so i cant give a 5 star but also just a note, she isnt a widow since her husband isnt dead she would be considered a divorcee while Dean can be considered one since his wife did die Overall good story keep it up! Try editing the novel when its done so it can be cleaned up (if you understand what i mean haha)

Second Marriage: My Strongest Bodyguard

Nonik_Farellidzy
5.0
394 Chs

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Nonik_Farellidzy
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by the way. I started fix it. thanks for the criticism and suggestions.

3yr
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PrincesAuntum
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Bryana your name make me remember with my close friend. This stories so great, everything so detail and so good. I reading this story like iam to a Bryana. good job thor. can't wait for the next chap!

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Yoanna88
Yoanna88Lv2

want to know more about Bryana and Jill. I hope Jill has a quick glance at Bryana. and hopefully both of them can open their hearts to each other

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Ayun_Saja
Ayun_SajaLv1

all the descriptions are very detailed and make me dissolved in the story. good .. waiting for the rest of the story .. Good job author .. waiting for next

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Ayun_8947
Ayun_8947Lv10

Good opening, the story of Bryana and a bodyguard as a single parent ... waiting for the continuation of their story which is full of unpredictable plot ... highly recommended

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Shaney_0816
Shaney_0816Lv15

A very nice one love it and congrats to the author addicted to read full of thrill action and excitement i love it Dean and Bryana are both good example of to forgive but never to forget and learn to be strong and a good example to everyone

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Sarah_Stroud
Sarah_StroudLv14

Can someone who's read the story please tell me that they don't end up cheating on each other in the story? that they betray each other and have children with others blah blah blah like other stories??? I don't think I can cope with spending so much money on another story that follows the same line as so many others that has such a depressing end? This has so much potential with such a strong connection between the FL and ML but not sure I can cope if it has the betrayal to each other side to it like many other... someone put me out if my misery 🤧 haha

3yr
Gloryglory96
Gloryglory96Lv11

Very exciting story. Has an unpredictable plot. Interesting and I love it. This story can be a recommendation for you to read . I need more[img=update]

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DeaNanda_22
DeaNanda_22Lv2

Aku review pakai bahasa Indonesia ya. Ceritanya bagus dan menarik banget. Aku langsung masukkan ke collection agar aku bisa membaca chapter selanjutnya dan mendapat notifikasi kalau ada update chapter terbaru. Semangat menulis ya Author aku mendukungmu di tunggu chapter selanjutnya ya 😊👍🏻

3yr
TanyaLuci
TanyaLuciLv1

I love you, romance novels that sometimes make me laugh with the main and second characters. recommended novels to be added to the collection and please provide appropriate reviews. This script does not do plagiarism so it should get a four or five star even perfect.

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