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2022-09-07 06:26

Review Until Chapter 40: Translation quality 5 ⭐️ even with the few errors noted. Compared to the recent released books, this one did better. The narration was quite childish. Well, the tone of it was. When you read through the story, you would feel like a primary student reading you her/his book for Language Class. The FL has money even if she does not have all of it yet. She knows what will happen and yet she does not consider investing in stocks. She went a roundabout way of it by asking another woman to invest in those companies. She needed to build her safe zone but until now, she hasn’t mentioned about stocking up on food and other necessities. There was a mention of gambling but in the end the author didn’t say how much she won. This book has potential though it’s not on my top list. So, characters, world background and story development 3 ⭐️.

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