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Muthoni_Murira
Muthoni_MuriraLv133yr
2021-06-28 06:02

I am currently on chapter 252 so my review is not comprehensive. First, this novel is one of those....., the kind where the FL is ridiculously powerful without an explanation. She is an ace singer-songwriter, dancer, doctor, racer, hacker, investor, linguist,..., etc. I really don't know why these FLs have to have these troupe powers just to be OP. Is it really too much to ask for authors to be reasonable and realistic or to at least provide a foundation for all these skills? Second, I feel that the romance in the story is an afterthought rather than the main storyline. There is very little development and after getting married in chapter 3, the two haven't even gotten to papapa. Third, 99% of all netizen characters appear to be brain dead. It's nonsensical. I will update again.

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Muthoni_Murira
Muthoni_MuriraLv13

Part 2: up to chapter 554 To add to what was mentioned in the previous update, the FL is also a pianist, violinist, professor, investor, entrepreneur (she can even establish a humongous company within three days), botanist, screenwriter, actress, supermodel, etc. Mind you, she is only 20, and you can't help but wonder how she learned all these skills to perfection. However, it has reached a level that you no longer want an explanation from the author since it can only mess with your common sense. Two, the romance is still an afterthought since the FL is too busy doing everything else. It's sad that there is not enough screen time between the main couple since their interactions are very fulfilling when they do happen. Third, the netizens and villains are still one-dimensional which is very annoying. I don't know if I can finish the book but if I somehow manage it, I will update again.

Muthoni_Murira
Muthoni_MuriraLv13

Up to chapter 663: I am finally dropping it because it has gone the way of most Chinese novels. The author seems to have forgotten some things they said at the start and provided contrary explanations. This is annoying since I still remember the original explanation. Also, nothing exciting is happening and everything is in a plateau.

Muthoni_Murira:Part 2: up to chapter 554 To add to what was mentioned in the previous update, the FL is also a pianist, violinist, professor, investor, entrepreneur (she can even establish a humongous company within three days), botanist, screenwriter, actress, supermodel, etc. Mind you, she is only 20, and you can't help but wonder how she learned all these skills to perfection. However, it has reached a level that you no longer want an explanation from the author since it can only mess with your common sense. Two, the romance is still an afterthought since the FL is too busy doing everything else. It's sad that there is not enough screen time between the main couple since their interactions are very fulfilling when they do happen. Third, the netizens and villains are still one-dimensional which is very annoying. I don't know if I can finish the book but if I somehow manage it, I will update again.
Coliflor
ColiflorLv12

+666

_Shining_Soul_001
_Shining_Soul_001Lv4

This review is really helpful..Nowadays maximum novels have op FL..It doesn't make sense at all..I won't start this novel..and I really appreciate you for giving time to write an honest and detailed review.

phoenix_8888
phoenix_8888Lv15

Added to all of that she is very young, its beyond ridiculous. Its like there is something wrong if the FL was over 25 and somewhat normal. Its the same with the ML, I will not be reading this.

_Shining_Soul_001:This review is really helpful..Nowadays maximum novels have op FL..It doesn't make sense at all..I won't start this novel..and I really appreciate you for giving time to write an honest and detailed review.
rhenkira
rhenkiraLv12

I'm happy I read your review first before trying to read this novel. It saved me from frustrations since I have a habit of reading the first chapts instead of relying on the synopsis since there are novels that have less than appealing synopsis but have amazing contents. anyways, Thank you😊😊

Ghaneza
GhanezaLv14

Thank goodness I've come across your review. This novel has been on my list since before it got voted. I guess I'll remove this from my library. Thank you very much, your review is such a help!!! ❤️

faridoday12
faridoday12Lv2

Thank god I come across this. I dont usually read FL novels or romance in general and since every ML novel feels cliche to me I thought of trying something new. You just saved me a lot of time that I could use to enjoy myself or do all my homework. Imma start reading the reviews before reading any novels from now on. Thanks again I appreciate you

Togglingon
TogglingonLv13

Thank you for your hard work and sacrifice, may the rivers of time wipe away the memories of bad novels from you!

Muthoni_Murira:Up to chapter 663: I am finally dropping it because it has gone the way of most Chinese novels. The author seems to have forgotten some things they said at the start and provided contrary explanations. This is annoying since I still remember the original explanation. Also, nothing exciting is happening and everything is in a plateau.
apologetic_human
apologetic_humanLv13

Hi! I'm so glad I came across your review. It saved me a lot of time! Also, I agree with the people above, nowadays, there's a lot of uber OP FL's with so many ridiculous skills. Like you're just going to wonder how do they manage those skills and how do they even perfect those skills given the fact that they're so young. Hays, and I realize that webnovel has been publishing a lot of this kind of novels and I'm so tired of it already.

Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15

Thanks for your review! 🥰

Pratibharitu
PratibharituLv12

This novel is a carbon copy of some famous novel Perfect Secret Love written by the same author of Hidden marriage . every plot is the same only male female change . Please stop using other work, every 3rd writer so called inspired by Hidden marriage and Their author's other work. If you want to read a better version of this novel then You can read Perfect Secret Love .

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