grammar is above average if were talking webnovel quality so yeah maybe not the best grammar out there but easy to understand and an author that is still learning absolutely love it i love how you play the story in the roman era and how you make the main character become the fire god kagutsuchi its a really nice original idea not done before it has alot of potential you made the awakening really nice i love how you put detail in how his awakening killed people and the feelings the mc felt as he awakened it worked really well together i look forward to more
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LIKEbut ofcourse that is why you set up a patreon after all u want to bring the best writing quality to readers always nice to see authors who try hard to make stories better for readers
deadly_orange:No problem and I, of course, will improve and once Grammarly premium is up and going quality should go up. And expect more good things to come
Yup in the end that's my goal in the end I prioritize the reader I don't expect to earn a living or any of that like others just to put out good stories and to entertain
AshuraMikoto:but ofcourse that is why you set up a patreon after all u want to bring the best writing quality to readers always nice to see authors who try hard to make stories better for readers