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Review Detail of Yunsildin in My Guardian System: The Trader

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I love this story. I literally read what chapters were available within two days. I’ve read a bit of this authors other books that get updated more frequently and they are good too but they don’t hold my interest like this one. So author I hope you update this story a bit more frequently then you have been. I don’t need daily updates but maybe once or twice a week would be lovely. Now, writing quality is very good. Few errors here and there but nothing that detracts from the reading experience. Writing stability, as I have only read this a few weeks ago but there has only been one update since. Refer to my initial paragraph of I’s love a slightly more frequent update schedule. Story and world development is really good. The world is what I would hope of the genre this novel is. Flawed. The society is literally a toilet and our MC learns it the hard way. His main desire is to just go back to his grandfather and live in ambiguity. Which I relate to on many levels. Character design isn’t anything special at the beginning of the story. Our MC is relatively plain in the beginning but the changes he goes through from story development make him interesting. All other characters are what I consider the basic anime palette. Now as this is a system novel I feel it deserves a mention. It literally involves trading, a skill I think is valuable especially for someone who doesn’t usually handle money or hang around “civilized” society. It’s the perfect system for the MC what happens to him. This a worth while story! I highly recommend it.

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My Guardian System: The Trader

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