Review Detail of Demosura in My Guardian System: The Trader

Item: My Guardian System: The Trader
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

DemosuraLv143yrDemosura

I will say the moment that the main protagonist started to reject equality was the moment I got interested in this story. Also if it helps, try to read your work to someone or say it outloud to yourself because there a few grammar mistakes. The mistakes do not effect the overall rating of the book for me. Thus I hope you update this novel and The mysterious black magician novel too because thos will be great to read more often. Thank you for writing these novels.

My Guardian System: The Trader

Fhrutz_D_Hollow

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Fhrutz_D_HollowAuthorFhrutz_D_Hollow

Read it and decide whether he is or not.

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3yr

Fhrutz_D_HollowAuthorFhrutz_D_Hollow

Thanks for the review by the way. Hope you voted for it as it is in the contest. I’ll try to minimize and edit some of grammatical errors from previous to the recent and future chapters. I will try to make this novel as better as my TMBM novel, or if not, I will make it better than it.

3yr

Fhrutz_D_HollowAuthorFhrutz_D_Hollow

*vote*

Fhrutz_D_Hollow:Thanks for the review by the way. Hope you voted for it as it is in the contest. I’ll try to minimize and edit some of grammatical errors from previous to the recent and future chapters. I will try to make this novel as better as my TMBM novel, or if not, I will make it better than it.

3yr

coccyxLv3coccyx

Is he an evil protagonist?

3yr