I will say the moment that the main protagonist started to reject equality was the moment I got interested in this story. Also if it helps, try to read your work to someone or say it outloud to yourself because there a few grammar mistakes. The mistakes do not effect the overall rating of the book for me. Thus I hope you update this novel and The mysterious black magician novel too because thos will be great to read more often. Thank you for writing these novels.
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LIKEThanks for the review by the way. Hope you voted for it as it is in the contest. I’ll try to minimize and edit some of grammatical errors from previous to the recent and future chapters. I will try to make this novel as better as my TMBM novel, or if not, I will make it better than it.
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Fhrutz_D_Hollow:Thanks for the review by the way. Hope you voted for it as it is in the contest. I’ll try to minimize and edit some of grammatical errors from previous to the recent and future chapters. I will try to make this novel as better as my TMBM novel, or if not, I will make it better than it.