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Thomas_Hauser
Thomas_HauserLv43yr
2021-08-29 09:05

Frist time reviewing, but I think this is a great story. It keep me into the plot and make want more. I want to see Moonlight Demon story from start to the end.

Moonlight Demon (GL LITRPG)

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