Review Detail of Necroghan in Re-uploading For Spirity

Well written and enjoyable. Very good grammar, which is rare. The story is quick to get into the action, no messing around. Shame there's not more chapters. My only work on point would be; don't be afraid to break those paragraphs up a bit more! This is a mobile site and that sort of thing makes it easier to read. Other than that, really good job Author!