Review Detail of abu_saeed in Sunagakure Shinobi Gamer

So the story is good. But you are progressing way too slowly. The problem with fanfics is that everyone is already familiar with the source material. So, there is a limit to how much I can enjoy or invest in the story knowing it's filler. I don't know how much of the story you have planned. I suggest you make your OCs interact with canon characters and canon events more. Having an OC story with non-canon events isn't good for a fanfic. Your writing quality is very good, so I read one of your original works. It is considerably better than this, in my opinion, because even if something that happened there were to be insignificant later it doesn't hinder my investment now. It's not the same with fanfics