Yeah the story had a ton of potential but well it isnt good at all. The MCs name is cringe and doesnt make sense since he isnt a Dr but a food truck owner.... “Dr. Phoenix” cringe. The story DESPERATELY needs an editor because even the names are wring 95% of the time. The MC in his first meeti g with Natasha has Tony spill the beans and then he does nothing lol guy can literally obliviate all of them but nah just poor writing. COMPLETE WASTE OF TIME.
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