it's not bad. but it's not good either. sorry but I don't sugarcoat when it comes to reviews. I did like the plot but why was it only dialogs ? what's the point in writing a novel if there's no narration? and speaking of dialogs, who are saying what and to whom, exactly?
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LIKENo problem. But don't take this too hard. This is just a review. It doesn't necessarily mean your book is bad. Someone else might end up loving it.
Meja_duduk:2 or 3 chara, i using this style from light novel that i like it so much. Ok, imma revise any problem. thx