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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv43yrMel_Aniv

I liked the story very much but for me, what lacked in the first chap was the setting like where are they talking. The details about the world too hehe..... But all in all, a good read. You write well when it comes to dialogues so you know what to do. 😉 Even better than me....hehe

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Meja_duduk
Meja_dudukAuthorMeja_duduk

yeah, i know. I will read your Novel for any references, thx

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Meja_dudukAuthorMeja_duduk

yeah, i already have my style about this. Dialogues is the main that I have for write more and more, for the narration is being hard than I imagined. I will work hard for this, thx

3yr
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Haha 😂 keep practicing! You can do it! Btw, I am from review swap.......

Meja_duduk:yeah, i already have my style about this. Dialogues is the main that I have for write more and more, for the narration is being hard than I imagined. I will work hard for this, thx
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