Review Detail of XianNi in Dimensional Store System In Apocalypse
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some serious mighty system grosses worlds and search for one Person preffered. why? No Idea so far. system says people in the Others world are Clones without education or Zombies. why a so mighty system dont educate one of the barbarians? No Idea. system steals Energy from Handy. why IT Not detach from the User and goes straight for a Car battery or the Electro Outlet in the Wall? NO FREAKING IDEA. this Story could be so Nice but the First chapters giva anyone with a brain mindmelt.
Dimensional Store System In Apocalypse
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Your comment was literally offensive, to the point you look enjoy doing it. Author please take his comment out. I would rather see a toxic comment like this gone instead of you getting demotivated like your first work and ended up in a hiatus. Nobody hate works that failed to get to a complete ending. Please pay attention to this work first. Ignore the haters. He's not your priority. We are.
Wow. Honestly speaking, I was impressed by the amount of detail you can point out from barely reading a few chapters before giving me an honest review like at 9 in the morning here for me in the UK. It felt like a hammer that came straight for my face before it goes to my 1.4k fans and 8,000 collected readers in this WN. As my daily dosage of motivation which comparable to a Red Bull or Monster Energy, your Thor Hammer worked miraculously well. It was too effective, honestly, to the point that your warmth and heartful effort will stop any writer from writing because they hate to break more hearts. If an answer is what you want, I would be gladly answering it, honestly. I would even put you in my remark as a constructive comment if you're actually putting this review at my recent chapter 260, which I believe many of my readers already get my story, see my improvement, invested in me, and so on. Serious and mighty system? I'm sorry but Stein ain't mighty. I have the tendency to break the reader's mentality, and I am a very negative writer full of ideas on how to make things miserable for the MC. So if you're asking why Stein traveled and prefer only MC? Of course, because I want it. Why would I make Stein out if it's not for MC? You've yet to reach further chapters, Am I right? Then I'm sure you got no idea that not only the clones in my story were equivalent to trash, but they're also even disposable, non-renewable, and worst, had no creative ability. They're equivalent to what we call plastics here. Again, with such a trash setting, I am still wondering why my readers (especially those that bought my 1,000 coins privilege tier to chase my 25 advance chapter, to go along with me in making MC's life miserable. You guys are as baddie as I am, huh?) Why Charging from a Handset and not a car battery, wall outlet, and so on? Because I don't want my mischievous, cutesy, lovely, readers fill with curiosity to try and go get stein from their father's power generator and wall outlet, of course! I am writing a book and using some sense. If I may, I would like to introduce wireless charging from the start so no plugs and cable are even required. But why not? Because I'm afraid that wireless charging is too slow! My laptop would be out of battery if Stein charges when I'm writing! And thank you for saying that my book is nice because nothing is better than making a mind melt like a subway's cheesy melt after getting into the toaster for a minute. You just made my day as I'm writing a reply because here I am, getting vaccinated in the afternoon, and waking up five hours earlier to write my promised chapter to my loyal readers, and get a nice thor hammer from you. Thank you, XianNi, for a great wake Up call. I believe that there will be more writers that will appreciate your looking not so kind but full of warmth gesture. Good day to you, and good luck to me. (Pstt: Nothing will come out good if you barely skimmed through a few chapters and give a review. Let's make WN a good site for readers and authors, shall we?)
If ya are honest about making wn good for everyone ya could have thought about polishing your First chapters to make it more understandable instead of writing sarcastic remarcs to Put me down. a News Reader Sees the First chapters and If they are substandard and Gilles with confusion many Potential Readers will drop Out. but instead of taking my words serious you Mock me and shows your Pride by how many Fans you have. i could Cook Garage and find a thousand people who will buy it but that doesnt mean my garbage is any good. this was an over the top example not saying your novel is garbage only could be better.
yanglin:Wow. Honestly speaking, I was impressed by the amount of detail you can point out from barely reading a few chapters before giving me an honest review like at 9 in the morning here for me in the UK. It felt like a hammer that came straight for my face before it goes to my 1.4k fans and 8,000 collected readers in this WN. As my daily dosage of motivation which comparable to a Red Bull or Monster Energy, your Thor Hammer worked miraculously well. It was too effective, honestly, to the point that your warmth and heartful effort will stop any writer from writing because they hate to break more hearts. If an answer is what you want, I would be gladly answering it, honestly. I would even put you in my remark as a constructive comment if you're actually putting this review at my recent chapter 260, which I believe many of my readers already get my story, see my improvement, invested in me, and so on. Serious and mighty system? I'm sorry but Stein ain't mighty. I have the tendency to break the reader's mentality, and I am a very negative writer full of ideas on how to make things miserable for the MC. So if you're asking why Stein traveled and prefer only MC? Of course, because I want it. Why would I make Stein out if it's not for MC? You've yet to reach further chapters, Am I right? Then I'm sure you got no idea that not only the clones in my story were equivalent to trash, but they're also even disposable, non-renewable, and worst, had no creative ability. They're equivalent to what we call plastics here. Again, with such a trash setting, I am still wondering why my readers (especially those that bought my 1,000 coins privilege tier to chase my 25 advance chapter, to go along with me in making MC's life miserable. You guys are as baddie as I am, huh?) Why Charging from a Handset and not a car battery, wall outlet, and so on? Because I don't want my mischievous, cutesy, lovely, readers fill with curiosity to try and go get stein from their father's power generator and wall outlet, of course! I am writing a book and using some sense. If I may, I would like to introduce wireless charging from the start so no plugs and cable are even required. But why not? Because I'm afraid that wireless charging is too slow! My laptop would be out of battery if Stein charges when I'm writing! And thank you for saying that my book is nice because nothing is better than making a mind melt like a subway's cheesy melt after getting into the toaster for a minute. You just made my day as I'm writing a reply because here I am, getting vaccinated in the afternoon, and waking up five hours earlier to write my promised chapter to my loyal readers, and get a nice thor hammer from you. Thank you, XianNi, for a great wake Up call. I believe that there will be more writers that will appreciate your looking not so kind but full of warmth gesture. Good day to you, and good luck to me. (Pstt: Nothing will come out good if you barely skimmed through a few chapters and give a review. Let's make WN a good site for readers and authors, shall we?)
not like I wanted to defend the author, but this reader sound like a pain to everyone. sorry but if I'm I'm the writer, I would have deleted your comment straight away. You sound like you have loads of remarks, and it was so evident on all your comment in other writers book. stop getting so toxic, mate. Not like I'm paying to read this author's book or he paid me to comment, but being nice does help. I think you have no idea that this author's work is even worst when he just started. I don't think he even need to flex his followers or what because what for? WN is literally announcing how much fans and reader he has, and he has all right to be proud to even write.
XianNi:If ya are honest about making wn good for everyone ya could have thought about polishing your First chapters to make it more understandable instead of writing sarcastic remarcs to Put me down. a News Reader Sees the First chapters and If they are substandard and Gilles with confusion many Potential Readers will drop Out. but instead of taking my words serious you Mock me and shows your Pride by how many Fans you have. i could Cook Garage and find a thousand people who will buy it but that doesnt mean my garbage is any good. this was an over the top example not saying your novel is garbage only could be better.
people Like you are the reason why authors dont get better. you butter Up to them instead of giving critic where it is deserved. im Not toxic but honest.
yungsern87:Your comment was literally offensive, to the point you look enjoy doing it. Author please take his comment out. I would rather see a toxic comment like this gone instead of you getting demotivated like your first work and ended up in a hiatus. Nobody hate works that failed to get to a complete ending. Please pay attention to this work first. Ignore the haters. He's not your priority. We are.
butter them up? yes I did. I am reading this author book two chaps per day using free tickets. as much as I hate nothing completed, I still put time to read his book as he improve. you on the other way, look enjoying making other people's day miserable. shame on you mate. a butter a day make the toast taste better each morning. didn't you see that the author had to go vaccination in his reply? since you're not paying, why not go somewhere else and bash other people's book? I hope they improve, not quitting.