Writing Quality: It's too good to be true. The grammars are good too. It had a very detailed information at the same time it won't make you feel bored at all. Story Development: The main story line development have a good pace (not too slow and not too fast). Well except for the Romantic relationship of the MC, its too fast I guess. But overall the story development is good. Character Design: I say the characters are too normal but its not that bad considering the story is still young. I'm looking forward to the Character development especially the MC Updating Stability: Its alright and its understandable considering the situation of the author. World Background: This has a lot of potential. Overall: The story is great and I'll support it. ps. sorry I'm not that good in writing a review.
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