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2021-05-08 11:22

Writing Quality: It's too good to be true. The grammars are good too. It had a very detailed information at the same time it won't make you feel bored at all. Story Development: The main story line development have a good pace (not too slow and not too fast). Well except for the Romantic relationship of the MC, its too fast I guess. But overall the story development is good. Character Design: I say the characters are too normal but its not that bad considering the story is still young. I'm looking forward to the Character development especially the MC Updating Stability: Its alright and its understandable considering the situation of the author. World Background: This has a lot of potential. Overall: The story is great and I'll support it. ps. sorry I'm not that good in writing a review.

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yanglin
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Thank you for the great and kind review. I'm happy that someone appreciates it. Will strive harder to deliver good stories and seriously written works.

Vinayak22493
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is it dropped?

yanglin:Thank you for the great and kind review. I'm happy that someone appreciates it. Will strive harder to deliver good stories and seriously written works.
yanglin
yanglinAuthor

Not yet but Im hospitalized at the moment for special case of allergy. Was on two different allergy medication and steroids since 2nd January up till today. Sadly, might get affected for long term until I get better.

Vinayak22493:is it dropped?
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