.................................................. Author you done a great job and also it's really great. but if I'm gonna be honest. you're missing the feelings needed ln the Story. but still really appreciated your hard work so. it's nice. also it has a unique Storyline but some parts are little weirdly constructed and also some parts sounds kinda blunt . I hope you'll do well in the upcoming Chapters. so yeah, pour your feelings while writing and yes you have my support and also I'm your biggest fan. haha! Good Luck! !!
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