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2023-01-14 10:12

Good premise, horrible everything else. I would give this novel a - 20 in world background if I could, as the novel constantly switches plot between them transmigrating into another world and them playing a vr game, and at one point, they even messed up the name of his cheat (which was in the title). The grammar is mediocre at best, and while this could be explained by translation, anyone who is able to read would be able to make this better novel by editing it for 3 days. I'm saying this at chap. 44, and the grammar is worse than chap.1, so while it could get better, it hasn't been doing so.

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