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Lascivious
LasciviousLv143yr
2021-03-27 00:08

an overall a good read if you ignore the grammar and spelling mistakes. don’t drop author:)

Ascension of Suzetsu Otsutsuki

Walmano
4.9
88 Chs

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Walmano
WalmanoAuthor

At the moment the translation is quite poor so I will leave this note until I edit the first chapters. Remember that there is also the Spanish version. I hope you enjoy reading my novel. :)

3yr

MEPHISTO
MEPHISTOLv4

Good work so far, but can somebody tell me how many girls are gonna be in his harem? 🤔 And curious about the names of the Multiverses. Good job anyway 👍

3yr
naraiz_ryhall
naraiz_ryhallLv3

I liked it so far, but sometimes (mostly I say ) ''he and she'' got mixed up .. A genuine question, are you writing this story in Spanish firstly????

3yr
LUZIR
LUZIRLv3

increible novela amigo, muy original el trasfondo y la trama esta increible, pero a quien engaño? lo mejor es que vayas a capturar las milfs supremas venelana, grayfia y yasaka. espero que nos des un r18 con ellas. no se si debo darle mis piedras a la version en español o esta asi que solo se las di a esta porque tenia mas xd

3yr
WETARDZ_R_US
WETARDZ_R_USLv2

Reveal spoiler

2yr
SinnedToHeaven
SinnedToHeavenLv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Zgravity_Mhp
Zgravity_MhpLv1

El personaje es agradable, por más que no he visto nada de anormal en el nuevo byaku-Sharingan e espero que el autor trabaje en esto, los niveles de fuerza aún no sé puede hablar mucho, el harén no sé si va a tener a alguna de las milf, eso espero, y quiero ver cómo que Isei en la historia será interesante, será que el protagonista Suer va a la escuela con Rías? Espero que está obra dé buenos frutos 😊👌👌👌😁

3yr
Chummy
ChummyLv13

good novel (ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ p..............................................................................................................

2yr
ManEater
ManEaterLv13

Just copied the following... I love the story so far, okay author-sama. It's quite interesting to see the relationships Suzetsu builds along the way. Besides that your translation quality improved, it shows that you have spent time writing.

3yr
Chufeng
ChufengLv1

I love the story so far, okay author-sama. It's quite interesting to see the relationships Suzetsu builds along the way. Besides that your translation quality improved, it shows that you have spent time writing.

3yr
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