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Andrew_maconha
Andrew_maconhaLv32mthAndrew_maconha

I think the protagonist is too good, when the protagonist is a superior entity, I prefer neutrality, not to mention that his personality irritates me and for a very complicated reason but the main thing is that the protagonist is a bit of a cliché The story is good, but it doesn't appeal to older audiences.

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Multiversal Internet Cafe!

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TheOtakuGod
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gonna make this quick since I'm in class rn but first off, the protagonists near-omnipotence is something I fix later on. Secondly, his personality is irritating on purpose. And finally, its a fanfic. What do you expect? its not going to appeal to an older audience until probably much later on