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RedShiniKaze
RedShiniKazeLv153yr
2021-08-18 10:35

similar to im actually a cultivation bigshot! but different enough chapters 1 to 116 are really good 117 jumps around a bit and changes where people were said to be almost like they were confused and couldn't remember the past few chapters details after that little arc end and we get back to the main character suddenly his attitude actions and whole vibe do a 180 its like another author took over but he just wasn't as good or he decided to just change the whole setup without any reason or explanation two people who could be considered part of his household and somewhat close to are now strangers who he is thinking rude, and contradictory to previous attitude, thoughts towards with no sense of the closeness they previously showed towards each other then there is a bit of deja view when they acknowledge that this is their second deal then go through the same script more or less word for word as if they were meeting for the first time. In conclusion really good and recommend until about chapter 116 then it just goes downhill and ruins all previous good impression.

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ThunderRyu
ThunderRyuLv5

I also noticed that, the change was really awkward, the people that he was treating as close family suddenly became stangers. It was as if the assumptions of everyone became real in an instant.

hidden_face
hidden_faceLv1

Funnily enough, this coincides with a quite markedly steep drop in the number of '!'s the author uses (can literally see the difference, 115 v. 116).

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