Review Detail of Jkesse in Online Game: I Can Evolve Everything

honestly i was kind aif excited about this book, sadly it was a major disappointment , the author rushes through things at super speed. the few chapters i read could have easily been doubled if the author had bothered to flesh thibgs out and given a few more details. also the MC is suprised about thibgs that happen the moment he is reincarnated in his younger self. he had been "reborn" less than an hour. with not time for a butterfly effect to take place. yet was suprised by his friend giving him am s class vr helmet. like really what the heck? the skill he got is great and id love to see it in a story that makes sense.