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BlackSwordman1234
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2022-02-04 06:41

Rewriting my first ever Fanfic which had many errors in it. I changed all of the mistakes I made at the start and just for the record. This FF is connecte to my main FF. Lightning and Fire Given Form.

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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

I recommend fixing the sypnosis

BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Author

True.

Kokushibou:I recommend fixing the sypnosis
Lucy_Carla
Lucy_CarlaLv4

when dxd arc starting..??

BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Author

Maybe 5-6 chapters from the current chapter.

Lucy_Carla:when dxd arc starting..??
JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

Are you writing from your phone? Because you still need to run this through grammerly man

BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Author

I do.

JimmyBlah:Are you writing from your phone? Because you still need to run this through grammerly man
BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Author

I do use Grammerly and I write from a computer.

JimmyBlah:Are you writing from your phone? Because you still need to run this through grammerly man
JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

Yikes, really not trying to be rude but you might want to re-read the first chapter. I got like 2/3rds of the way through it and there’s like four spelling/grammar issues already 😅

BlackSwordman1234:I do use Grammerly and I write from a computer.
BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Author

That’s it?

JimmyBlah:Yikes, really not trying to be rude but you might want to re-read the first chapter. I got like 2/3rds of the way through it and there’s like four spelling/grammar issues already 😅
0vrLrd71
0vrLrd71Lv5

Wdym connected to your other fanfiction? same multiverse? world?

BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Author

Multiverse.

0vrLrd71:Wdym connected to your other fanfiction? same multiverse? world?
Cthulhu12
Cthulhu12Lv1

Through some elden ring In there, I been gripping it non-stop. There is a lot of interesting things you could add 🙌🏽

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