Review Detail of ImNex in Misogynistic Hololiver (A Hololive Fanfic)
Review detail
I really don't know how to give scores with this fanfic...It's just too unexpecting in my opinion. All the female characters I have seen in books usually are not this wild or weird... No wonder MC is misogynistic. Other than this, the fanfic itself is good. I would rather see the MC more. I feel like you're giving more screentimes to these weirdo girls than the protagonist himself. The part where one of the b****es was sexting to her boyfriend...what was the point of it? Are we supposed to get hard or something? Or to show how delusional these girls are? Don't worry, author. I would NEVER fap to these girls even if ONE of them started dating MC and have se*. At this point, I'd rather you get rid of harem tag cause I would rather see him single and successful than go near these cougars. Still... 5 stars as a support. I feel clickbaited... none of the females are normal.. most are just slu*s. And MC who doesn't trust women is going to be in a relationship with some of them?... Their POVs keep turning me off from liking them so much... I can't really help you with how to make things better since you're the author. I'm just a reader who's telling my experience. You could take some of the criticisms here and probably think about how to improve it or just ignore it if you think what I said are cap. Hope you have a nice day, good sir.
Misogynistic Hololiver (A Hololive Fanfic)
MinecUwUberif
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I did continue reading it and am not disappointed at all. Great job, you handled the plot like a champ.
MinecUwUberif:Thanks for leaving the criticism, boi. I am still starting with the story, and I have some plans on how to bring this into fruition. If you are gonna drop the book though, understandable, but if you're gonna continue reading it, I hope the 2nd arc (aka The day after the MC's first day) will be able to give you at least a bit of a hint as to what the next chapters might be. All in all, thanks for being able to read this.
Thanks for leaving the criticism, boi. I am still starting with the story, and I have some plans on how to bring this into fruition. If you are gonna drop the book though, understandable, but if you're gonna continue reading it, I hope the 2nd arc (aka The day after the MC's first day) will be able to give you at least a bit of a hint as to what the next chapters might be. All in all, thanks for being able to read this.
