Review Detail of Ghostie_05 in Transformed into the DC World

i don't know if the writing quality improves after but i couldn't get past chapter 3 i didn't understand a single thing i'd rather read mtl and god knows how much i hate mtl, so if you could rewrite at least the first chapters it would be great i really like the idea of the plot but i can't read it like this even if english isn't ur native i don't think u could write this badly, just keep ur sentences simple and understandable