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Nani_Sensei
Nani_SenseiAuthor3yrNani_Sensei

Hello it's your author here with his shameless review. Well I am posting this note to let you all know that I am a novice writer and the story I am writing will have many mistake. It is an alternative universe so there will be many things different from cannon. I will try my best to make it interesting to the best of my abilities and I want to thank all of those readers who spend time on this novel. Arigato and Sayonara

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I am Uzumaki Naruto

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DivineHyper
DivineHyperLv12DivineHyper

Is this harem?

JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4JapaOuO

Man I know if you are a beginner author but do a little research on Famdom so as not to make mistakes in the context that even if Nerfou Naruto being that he has the system which in a night's sleep, It gives him a full recovery of HP making him train well for several years and with gravity he could train even higher than the tier kage only with Taijutsu because of gravity, If you must be thinking what I'm talking about, imagine the Player's Body giving the Host the power to not get hurt while training, even if he can't handle gravity, he would gain status. And even if the severity of damage to the Host is much higher than what your body can handle, your body would be brand new the next day, and with the player's mind there is a barrier against mental damage.

JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4JapaOuO

Honestly I would give at least high level tier kage just for the system and as it has tier Super Kage gravity system it would also be easy at 13 years old

JapaOuO:Man I know if you are a beginner author but do a little research on Famdom so as not to make mistakes in the context that even if Nerfou Naruto being that he has the system which in a night's sleep, It gives him a full recovery of HP making him train well for several years and with gravity he could train even higher than the tier kage only with Taijutsu because of gravity, If you must be thinking what I'm talking about, imagine the Player's Body giving the Host the power to not get hurt while training, even if he can't handle gravity, he would gain status. And even if the severity of damage to the Host is much higher than what your body can handle, your body would be brand new the next day, and with the player's mind there is a barrier against mental damage.
Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

Ah so he has a system no thanks then Systems always ruin stories

gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5gamabunda4873

romance w/????

Heavenly_Devil
Heavenly_DevilLv6Heavenly_Devil

Fix mistakes, and start by fixing the Shadow Clone problem.

TheKonnan17
TheKonnan17Lv4TheKonnan17

must have never read solo leveling

Ballad:Ah so he has a system no thanks then Systems always ruin stories
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv5Insane_Pumpkin

Well... i read the comments and i want to tell you 1 rule of making classic Gamer fanfics... They are OP allways OP... If the MC with Gamer power is ganing power slower then anyone with exclusions of special means like artifacts, rituals, other cheats, bloodline etc... Then it means he is not deserving of the system in the 1st place... And when you put the MC in NARUTO verse and people like Lee, Neji, Sasuke, Gara are stronger then you then you can just off yourself and pray that the system will find someone more deserving.

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10Ototsu_Yume

It is, even though author never put the tag, I don't know about later but by chapter 11 he has two girlfriends (Ino and Hinata) and also forces Sasuke and Sakura together. (And despite Naruto being the gamer, Hinata, Sasuke and Ino catch up with him in just a couple months of training.)

DivineHyper:Is this harem?