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At the moment there are too few chapters to give a proper review but it is enough to say a few things. The quality of the writing is quite good, everything is understood at the level that it is easy for the reader to imagine the situation ... although in the future it would not be bad to gradually increase the amount of details in certain situations. The idea of ​​the story can be considered cliché, but for the moment it has not strayed from the path, it can become a jewel, and not necessarily hidden ... but due to the lack of chapters and development of the plot many things can happen. The development of characters, and that of the world, are in the initial stages, a presentation. And in my opinion the background should be as good as those who act in it. I have high expectations, but I have not yet formed a critical opinion on the story. I just hope it doesn't involve NTR or that nasty stuff, you know, some things are just fetishes. I have no problem with the MC being a GOD OF KILLING, in fact it could be part of his essence, but I cannot tolerate some abnormal fetishes as an avid reader. Without offending of course. In the future I will do something more detailed, so I will be looking forward to this not being abandoned. The story has potential, and I hope it is not poorly executed. Thanks!

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