Review Detail of La_Light in Broken Pieces
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Hey author, This story is nice. I'm only giving less stars because I felt u could have explained the characters in more details and also background of witch realm is missing. The story started and it went with the plot but i never got a chance to know more about the characters in detail or about the other world. Otherwise, your way of writing is great. Your story and plot is also unique. I wish you could try writing more elaborate novels as time flies and l wish you best of luck for it. The story did keep me engaged but I also felt that I cannot connect to the characters. That is only because it is short novel. Good luck with your next novels. ❤
Broken Pieces
Mcheidi J. Aniston
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Hi, Thank you very much for the advice. I am just an aspiring young author and I really appreciate these kind of mild criticisms and I also believe that there is more room for improvement for me. Thank you very much and please do check out my book, Puzzle Of Fate and Black’s Mate, which is also a fantasy. For the Black’s mate, I go into details so please check it out and my completed book Puzzle of fate is also a very good book. Thank you.
asare_Jennifer:Hi, Thank you very much for the advice. I am just an aspiring young author and I really appreciate these kind of mild criticisms and I also believe that there is more room for improvement for me. Thank you very much and please do check out my book, Puzzle Of Fate and Black’s Mate, which is also a fantasy. For the Black’s mate, I go into details so please check it out and my completed book Puzzle of fate is also a very good book. Thank you.
asare_Jennifer:Hi, Thank you very much for the advice. I am just an aspiring young author and I really appreciate these kind of mild criticisms and I also believe that there is more room for improvement for me. Thank you very much and please do check out my book, Puzzle Of Fate and Black’s Mate, which is also a fantasy. For the Black’s mate, I go into details so please check it out and my completed book Puzzle of fate is also a very good book. Thank you.
La_Light:You are welcome! And sure, I'll check the other two novels. 😊