Review Detail of ShoRin in 365 Days With You

in case no one notice my comment, I'll let you know here. I am the author and sorry if the update was slow. I got into a school with a dorm system and we cant bring our electronics. but when I get home, I will write back everything I've written in school and make sure you guys had a lot of updates! stay tuned and don't be shy to drop criticism and point out my mistake because I am still new and I would love to hear people's opinion.