Review Detail of Rayeen_Noledo in Symphony

I like the plot of the story and the way you right in some part is awesome and I can see a real talent.. I am not a good writers myself but... There are loopholes in the plot.. Like in reality a baby doesn't have any recollection about the very specific thing that happens in their life, specially when they are new born.. It might be safe if it is a POV of the Parent.. Second Language and dictionary is a real challenge for a three year old child what more for analization of the situation.. A baby may feel hostile towards violence and it can be traumatic for a child but somehow it will be a mistery for them of what the situation is all about.. All in all.. It is a good story and has potential.. Keep it up..