Review Detail of SealDeity in The Rise of Quetzalcoatl

The first arc was great as it was RPG style, and the MC didn't immediately become world destroyingly OP which is a big win in my books. The power system is alright if a bit basic. I just have four main problems: The Brave of Ice becoming the MC's 'mom', which is logic that was pulled out of someone's ass. the second is that the whole romance with Mia is terrible. Nothing against Yuri or anything but they go from hatred to girlfriends in the span of a few days. Relationships simply don't work that way, and Mia as a character overall is mostly useless other than her romance role. The third problem is Tolf as a whole. Not only does the hivemind drag the MC down with the side characters, but it is completely unnecessary as a whole. The last problem is so many changing POVs in later chapters. There are so few parts with MC's POV that the book just becomes all about Tolf and not the MC. This story could have gone places, but there are so many plotholes, confusing perspective changes and annoying plot armor that it is not worth a read.