Grammar on point. Spacing on point. Narration and dialogue, check. Jerlina has gone through a lot in the first 8 chapters and I sympathize with her. She losing her baby was a big blow to me because it made me really cry. Male lead so far isn't so appealing to me because of his character but I have hopes that he will develop but before that, I just don't have an impression on him. The main story is interesting because it seems the male lead has carried an unrequited love for Jerlina since forever but he has a terrible way of showing it. Enters the green tea bitch of sister who he is yet to find out her true nature. In all, I will be around with my cup of coffee sipping and waiting to see because I love Jerlina.
Golda
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LIKEGolda:Yes the ML has a terrible way to show his love and really bad timings. He will grow on you in the later chapters. Thanks for the high praises. You made my day 🤗😊