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Purplebride
PurplebrideLv64yr
2021-03-31 18:52

Grammar on point. Spacing on point. Narration and dialogue, check. Jerlina has gone through a lot in the first 8 chapters and I sympathize with her. She losing her baby was a big blow to me because it made me really cry. Male lead so far isn't so appealing to me because of his character but I have hopes that he will develop but before that, I just don't have an impression on him. The main story is interesting because it seems the male lead has carried an unrequited love for Jerlina since forever but he has a terrible way of showing it. Enters the green tea bitch of sister who he is yet to find out her true nature. In all, I will be around with my cup of coffee sipping and waiting to see because I love Jerlina.

Forced Marriage: Escaping Her Monster

Golda
4.8
400 Chs

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Golda
GoldaAuthor

Yes the ML has a terrible way to show his love and really bad timings. He will grow on you in the later chapters. Thanks for the high praises. You made my day 🤗😊

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Purplebride
PurplebrideLv6

He better do before I spank the shit out of him 😂😂😂😊😊

Golda:Yes the ML has a terrible way to show his love and really bad timings. He will grow on you in the later chapters. Thanks for the high praises. You made my day 🤗😊
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I normally don't give reviews so early in a story, but oh Lord this one just bewitched my heart!❤️ and we need to support this great Author!!! I found this story by miracle! I like to point that is a well written story, and it's delighting to read it flowing naturally and with no grammar errors. The story plot is so complex, intense, and covers controversial topics like abortion, kidnapping, vengeance, force marriage among others. So far our dear Author has orchestrated all the plot in a way that leads our hearts to a different dimensions making us, the audience, beg and hope for a fast and safe landing! Thank you dear Author for bringing us this great master piece and please do not think to drop it for any reason!! You are an amazing writer!! 💖

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Lisa_Lemon
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It's a wonderful book with many unexpected turns. You need a few chapters to get into the story, but after that, I couldn't stop myself from reading. At first Jeremy (ML) seems very unlikeable and I couldn't imagine that he could ever redeem himself, but he isn't the "Monster" I first thought of. He is a really sweet guy who loves Jerlina so much, but is just a bit dumb to realize how he and Jerlina got manipulated by a certain someone (not gonna spoil). It's a story of lot of misunderstandings, but after they got cleared, you're in for a great love story of two people who bring out the best in each other.

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ZaynNike
ZaynNikeLv5

I rarely ever write book reviews and just silently support the books but this book is totally worth a review, the author laid such beautiful emphasis on each character making them feel so real. At first you'd think Joel (ML) is really such a monster and you'd think there's no way to redeem him but he is such a beautiful person at heart and the way the author explained to the tiny details on how everyone feels and not just skipping their feelings and the way the explanations on miscarriages, kidnapping and emotional manipulation was explained into detail was so great and the way each character (especially Jerlina(FL/MC)) development was created is sooooo good. My review seems all jumbled up but I just finished reading this novel and it feels like a part of me has just been seperated😭. Anyways BRAVO author you did a great job 😘

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Golda
GoldaAuthor

Hi, this is my third book in Webnovel. Hope you will enjoy reading this. The FL is Jerlina. She worked hard to be where she is and she believes in taking personal responsibility. She doesn't think the end justify the means. Her life is upturned when her boyfriend who according to her is the only one who truly loved her broke up with her and marries her enemy. The ML is Jeremy Harrison. He is a loud, crude and boorish guy who takes no nonsense. He falls for Jerlina and in his attempt to keep her safe, he does some unthinkable thing that shattered her soul. He wants to be her protector when all she wants is to escape him. This is a romance story but it is slow burning since the FL hates - I'm not using the word 'hate' loosely. She despises him. She won't warm up to him immediately, but she will gradually get to know him and learn that a lot of her opinions about him are wrong. It will take 50+ chapters for the FL to learn about him and after that she will slowly have her heart moved. Updates will be at least one chapter daily. If this book reaches trending ranks, I will do mass releases. Although English is not my first language, I try to be as grammatically correct as possible and you won't find a lot of errors (hopefully). Thank you for choosing to read my book and I hope you like it.

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scarlettben
scarlettbenLv13

Okay... Second review after 132 Chapters. The story development is very good. Jerlina genuinely hated Jeremy at first but then she slowly learns about the situations that led them where they are. Jeremy is very trusting of his sister but he is not stupid to believe her entirely. He investigates and he thinks for himself and with Jerlina's help started to see how Emma truly is. The character development is awesome!💕💯 Love this book very much 💞 I purchased coins for the first time to read this book. That's how amazing this book is 💝 Those two will make an amazing couple. Can't wait for more ❣️ And this is an amazing author we all need to support with our everything 💖

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scarlettben
scarlettbenLv13

Another amazing work by author Golda 👍👏 Must read! It would make you feel a lot of emotions. The FL is suffering a lot since a lot of powerful people are conspiring against her. Her family is trash too. I still can't accept the ml and I hope she really leaves him. The ex is not good either. I hope she finds someone who truly loves her. The other characters if the book so far may frustrate you, but they are true to their character. A mother will try to stand by her son as much as she can but she knows her sons actions are wrong and tries to protect the FL. The nurse tries her best too. The ml is a leader if a gang and too powerful so not many can go against him. Hope he gets what he deserves.

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Liza_swan
Liza_swanLv14

Great book! Must read! I love this author. She has the best plots and well fleshed out characters who bring life to the stories. Reading this book I felt my gut wrenching feeling the pain of the MC. The MC has a lot of potential to grow and I will be with Author Golda as she guides Jerlina through her journey.

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Gabriela_Ochoa_7987
Gabriela_Ochoa_7987Lv15

Omg you had me and hello!! I love this book, so far it is one of my favorite books. It had me wanted more and more felt everything each character was going through. Thank you, hope to read more of your books

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tanu_sam
tanu_samLv14

I have seen this book in feature, though the title attracted me but the piles of errands didn't allow me to pick it up until recently. This first chapter locked my interest and there is no secret I would be following the book. To be honest, it hurted me to know how the fl suffered all these years and Emma...if I was allowed a murder in the world. I would murder her with my own hands and throw her into the Pacific Oceanto feed to the fishes. Gerry...i have mixed feeling about him. Jeremy, dude please for the sake of your luna, clear all the mess you made. And I sympathise with the heroine but she needs to grow a brain to look at the big picture and not to let the grief blind her. The writing style was as smooth as butter 😂 and technically it was the reason I didn't left it after reading it for a few chapters. There are some book that took a spot in ur head and this was that book. And author can you please hasten the updates and increase the number of chapters you post in one go?

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