Review Detail of LadyChef in Forced Marriage: CEO's sweet little wife

I’m sure this has the potential to be very good but it’s very difficult to read for native English speakers. I’m used to incorrect pronouns on this app but some sentences are incomplete and trying to guess what the author meant or what scene they’re trying to set can take you out of the story. I assume this hasn’t been proofread and edited yet so I’ll wait a while and return to see if there’s any updates.