Are we submitting AI written novels now? Is that a thing? I can't believe this is a native English speaker. Did you google translate this? Every sentence is painful to read. I can't follow any sort of logic from the characters. I lost it at Vera honestly asking if a male character ever wore clothes. What the actual heck??? and her aside about having to wear clothes like it was a chore? Look, if this is a real person I feel bad, but this has to be a mildly edited AI script. I can't believe an ***** wrote this with a straight face.
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LIKEHonestly you are very rude there is a difference and line between crtiques and what can be done to straight up blatantly insulting someone. they tried their best to write in a diff langauge and for that i congradulate the author because learning a foreign langaunge is hard, especially when you start learning after a certain age. also at least they put in effort and tried even though they used google. you are no longer giving crtiques about the authors english but straight up insulting the author. like they say, if you have nothing good to say, dont say anything and even if freedom of speech is a thing, giving a human respect and politeness are basic human rights everyone should be given.