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Review Detail of Gh0st00 in I opened gold finger in Marvel

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Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv153yrGh0st00

okay first and foremost it needs editing like really bad wrong words use some words didn't make sense does the premise of the story seems pretty good and I've only gotten to do chapter 3 but it's starting to hurt reading it I can't get immersed in it with how copy all the wrong words and everything is used

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I opened gold finger in Marvel

COPYCREATIONS

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COPYCREATIONS
COPYCREATIONSAuthorCOPYCREATIONS

well what do you expect it Google translate bro 😔😔😔

WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv11WN_grdy_mthr_fker

nice

Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv13Aeternabilis

Go through it with Grammarly? Will at least sort out the major problems and make it more presentable

COPYCREATIONS:well what do you expect it Google translate bro 😔😔😔