okay first and foremost it needs editing like really bad wrong words use some words didn't make sense does the premise of the story seems pretty good and I've only gotten to do chapter 3 but it's starting to hurt reading it I can't get immersed in it with how copy all the wrong words and everything is used
COPYCREATIONS
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LIKEGo through it with Grammarly? Will at least sort out the major problems and make it more presentable
COPYCREATIONS:well what do you expect it Google translate bro 😔😔😔