Review Detail of amaturewriter in deletedopg

Idea is dope. SI as an OC of a rarely used character. cool, but do hope it becomes relevant for story rather than just a click bait. Also cool that MC is an MA, hope its focused more on, along with his past life the power is cool too. pretty OP shit.. will based world manipulation or so?idk but seems interesting. Whilst normally not a fan of SI that dont have knowledge of the world they SI, story is interesting so cool. I like how he thought to gather info using birds, nice. Do hope more shit like this happens..ie: intelligence, moments of MC maturity along with him using his SI meta world knowledge for advantage. Hope MC donst follow cannon as third wheel or is a heroic personality. like save everyone type shit. Would be cool if MC is something else like a marine, Bounty hunter or even a RA...though pirate would be fine but suggest MC try to be something is before like BH or marine, before he becomes pirate. Any relationships just build, no rush...and pls dont make MC a ' prince ' like most ff's here or a manslut. power: I dont like zoans but I;d suggest a zoan DF if MC every gets one, suits him...something like a Genbu? the mythical turtle? White tiger?A eastern dragon [ not wester ] like kaido but of the ryuu model? basically the higer lvl of that variant? like fire and magma? Eitherway 4 chps in and just want to say...