Review Detail of KageMugen in Card Apprentice Daily Log

On a more realistic website I would give it less. Everything is very good and no glaring loopholes in the story. The universe is what it is and it's developing nicely. The most irksome thing about the book is that it is apparently being written on a tablet or mobile or has autocorrect so a lot of times instead of the right words there are similar words. For example work shippers instead of worshippers. In need of an editor badly otherwise a very nice and entertaining read. P. S. If you ask me nicely I will edit...