I actually forgot to add my own review until now. Anyways, what can I say, I'm still a writer I training and I tend to make some mistakes while writting, and the only thing that makes me not vote with 5 stars is the fact that I usually only have the energy to write one chapter everyday. Yet I have to write for my other fanfiction too, so there's days I just don't feel like writting a chapter. Anyways that aside, MC may be a bit chunni, but he will devote his all to becoming the best chunni. To the point it may make you laugh on how compromised is him with his goal of becoming a shadow eminence. That's all for my review, if you want to know more then check the fic yourself! Peace.

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Well, at first it was fun to read. Sid Kageno was actually a lot better than your MC. Why? Because he isn't always behind the scene or being MOB. He also flexes. He also goes around being super cool dude infront of his followers. At first it was cool. But, alter it became boring as MC is just MOB. All he does is being MOB. Like, he also has his moments but his actual flexing moments are just few sentences or a paragraph while his MOB journy is explained a lot.

I like your first ff so I came to check this one and it good hope you keep going ............................................................

Writing Quality (5) -No problem with it. Very easy to read and follow. Story Development (5) -The pace is quick but it avoids unnecessary filters. Character Design (4) -It's the usual 'I wanna be a shadow eminence' Updating stability (4) -Like 4 - 6 chaps a week so that's decent. World Background (4) -Could have used more descriptions on stuff. Overall, read it as it is worth your time.

I have a question, where did you get the idea for this fanfic, I ask this because its VERY unique, I feel that you got it from a manga called "eminence in the shadows" but thats just my thoughts, you get a free 5 stars since you have 50 chaps on your other novel, so I trust that you will make it far with this one

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