Review Detail of Spicybuun in Gods Art - The Legendary Combat Summoner

Hello! Good job so far on the story. I liked reading about him building his strength up, and it's nice to see him put in the effort. A suggestion I have for you is to describe how the characters look like. They have personality but lack description. You could also improve your writing if you emphasize how he feels after running to build up his strength. I noticed you put what his reaction was, but you could also use "He brushed off the sweat on his forehead as he leaned heavily against the wall, his breath coming out in short puffs. Sweat had soaked through his shirt when he was running and he barely had the energy to stay upright". Overall, pretty interesting story. Keep up the good work! [img=recommend][img=recommend]