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Nice fanfic and the chapter words length is super long 10k words. Go and read this, it's worth your time. BTW meatball_san you forgot to add ****** in your tags. There are many readers that don't like ****** and make a 1 star review saying "Disgusting mother and son Fucking each other" to make that readers away in this book. I'm glad you write this kind of fanfic meatball_san😊 and don't worry about attach.

In principle, the fanfiction is very good, the characters are not made of cardboard and are well written, the background of the world is the same as in the canon, so there is no point in talking about this, I can't say much about the battles, since there were not so many battles at the moment, updates are enough unstable. The only thing I really didn't like was that MC gives away not only his system, but almost all his skills to all those close to him, and even sometimes gives quite cheat items, I don't mind MC making his loved ones stronger , but I am opposed to him giving everything that he has, having lost the whole point of his system and skills.

it's quite good but the author just put the part concerning the plot its just thickening it more and more but it becomes extreamly tiring. He forgot that the gamer is more about his farm and how he progress little by little but here that was only exploited at the Begening. The character design is simply skipped. And there is too much cliff hanger, promonition, you just can't enjoy the curent events.

s usual, the main hero gives his powers to others without the advantage of himself (it would be better if he did it so that they would have to give half of their experience to him so that they would not even reach a hair of his strength, well, no, you have to give them all the power of the system and the point is what is special hero) (google translate)

The beginning is good, but after the somewhat confession from tatsuki and orihime... after that the nxt chap is just meh. If your here for the romance dont expect much cuz his firting style is just a repeat. Then after making a big move(like confessing and stuff) or making the relationship with a girl official, mc will left them hangging in an instant. If your here for the gamer, its a meh but also dont expect much. Its ok in the beginning, but when mc go to soul society. The vibes of a gamer become thin.(its hrd to explain, but mehh🤷🏻‍♂️) If your here for the plot... dont bother as the ending is the same in every arc. Even thought many big events happen that should chance the of plot... but nothing change. The plot stick to the og one with just many “big” events happen in the middle. Also the mc’s personality is... 😔😔 Even then, i want to commend the author for the long chaps. Some chaps can be divided in to 3 some into 2 and the first few chaps into 4 or 5(i think). To make it as long as the common chaps for ff novels. (Chap 20, 1 arc)

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For most part the storyline and characterisations were excellent apart from some minor examples. That said those minor details added up together to make a situation that suddenly destroyed my entire enjoyment in the story. The first around 20 chapters were very enjoyable but the moment it started to crossover all the previous story become a waste.

Not bad at all! Good chapter length instead of those "I am so great I upload daily or every two days" and in reality they just stretch the word count and barely make chapters a thousand words long. Pretty much everything is good.