Review Detail of MadFool in Rise of the Divine Empire

This is my first novel so far. Personally I think this will be worth a read and I hope most of you will at least give it a chance. If it feels like it isn't your cup of tea after the first 5 chapters or so, I completely understand. It would be much appreciated if you guys would comment on what you liked or disliked in the novel, so that I can try to improve myself. I'm not a native English speaker so there probably will be some grammatical errors so I hope you can just ignore them and focus on the story itself instead.