Review Detail of _EMI_ in From the stars to westeros

Usually I don't give low rating, I just stop reading the story altogether, but I wasted my time on this, went in with great expectations, but was ultimately disappointed. The story was acceptable until chapter 10. Then MC killed Rey. And that was it for me. How could Kylo Ren not convince Rey to join him? It makes no sense! Rey may had been a Jedi, but she had no prejudice against dark side force users like other Jedis. This was not what that movie was even about. Even if he couldn't convince her to join him, Jedi were already finished. Yoda himself burns down the temple in the last movie, there was no need to kill Rey, or Luke, who was just quietly living out the rest of his life in peace. Author lacks sufficient imagination required to become a writer, or the proper understanding of the characters. And this has nothing to do with English not being the first language.