Plato's Symposium, the roots of the classical philosophy of love. When From its riches... the idea of two loves. The first... excites to the desire of philosophy and truth - the second, excites to desire. Everything about these primaeval men was double: they had four hands and four feet, two faces, hence the creation of theory of the Repetition Compulsion which known by many as the popular phrase: "Love is Blind." This "re-living" action... committed and practiced by majority, since their perceptions of romantic partners are often not based on objective reality, but are rather positive illusions. Thus, for example, they may perceive our partners as more physically attractive than ourselves, a phenomenon that has been called the 'love-is-blind bias', However, many of whom abuse such an innocent approach... and for there, this story began to spread its crimson thread. Because betrayal is an inherent part of love, an antithesis for its thesis... and when things are being loved, and humans are being used, the dilemma becomes inevitable. Blinded by love. Blinded by mundane things. The romance expression in this story would soon fade, leaving only the contemporary problem we are all struggle to solve. Greed out of ephemeral things, sparked the fires of vengeance. Blood decorated the path as one's life has zero meaning... the path on which our main character must gone through, where the light become dimmer in the end. Nothing can stop her quest for revenge as the light of love has been blinding her sight as it's becoming a personal level. That's basically a plot of this story. What a long summary. Anyways, I really like about what's going on in this romance story. When I read the title, I thought it would be your generic parody romance that available anywhere in this site... but no... this story apparently grew even darker by including many adult themes... literal adult themes I say. Such as murder, betrayal, insidious intent, and et cetera. Not gonna spoil it, you have to read it yourself. Everything seems fine to me, except one and only... difficulty I stumbled across, namely the grammar. But I'm not gonna say much about it since English isn't my native language either, yet what I noticed the most was that the subject pronouns being used. I noticed the author was mistakenly wrote "he" for female character and "she" for male character, especially in a few beginning chapters. It's quite noticeable, and took me quite some time to perceive which one referred to... but, it doesn't make the story incomprehensible. It still fun to read after. I think that's it, since this review already too long. Thank you for the author, writing the story for us - the readers - to enjoy. Really like the emotional struggle the mc must deal... hopefully you can expand it and develop into something new. Once again, thank you.
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thank you very much ... this is the first time I get along and constructive review. Frankly, I'm not a whiny romantic person. but I try to make an entertaining story. Because I'm a person who likes comedy, politics and a little fantasy. Only it turned out that writing a romantic comedy story turned out to be more difficult. Moreover, I rely more on language translation machines. Even though I tried to edit the word She or He. However, there are still many who have not passed the edit censorship. Hehehe! Thanks to my brother
It entertains enough for me. I do like the more darker themes in your romance story. It shows that this is a real romance one should expected in real life. There's no easy-going-happy-ending romance irl, I mean there is, but very rare. This story is more driven by human's love, not just love. And then no worries about using translation machine, me too once used google translate. But, in the end, writers do thrive along side with their story. Just keep writing >∆<
Meri_Sajja:thank you very much ... this is the first time I get along and constructive review. Frankly, I'm not a whiny romantic person. but I try to make an entertaining story. Because I'm a person who likes comedy, politics and a little fantasy. Only it turned out that writing a romantic comedy story turned out to be more difficult. Moreover, I rely more on language translation machines. Even though I tried to edit the word She or He. However, there are still many who have not passed the edit censorship. Hehehe! Thanks to my brother
Houraji:It entertains enough for me. I do like the more darker themes in your romance story. It shows that this is a real romance one should expected in real life. There's no easy-going-happy-ending romance irl, I mean there is, but very rare. This story is more driven by human's love, not just love. And then no worries about using translation machine, me too once used google translate. But, in the end, writers do thrive along side with their story. Just keep writing >∆<image
