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Review Detail of Dev_013 in Fortune's Chosen - The Legend of Ivo

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plot is nice and the world background is decent but the execution of the is poor... there little to no conversation... nothing like any emotional moment... yeah you can not find any moments like that... not even angry or happy or any as you can think of... mc directly get into relationship...without even any developments... too many flows... yeah too many...

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Fortune's Chosen - The Legend of Ivo

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Yes, I don't really like writing dialogues, and I also don't like reading books in which you have to worry a lot about the state of the main character and his friends, but perhaps I'll try to add more such intriguing moments after the prologue.