Review Detail of ManEater in Harry Potter and the Legend of a Phoenix

Author-san, before you read my rant on why I gave my rating, I must say that you should not drop the book due to the negative feedback that I am about to spew out. You would probably say, 'why would I do that? I want the constructive criticism' but authors have dropped their books due to constructive feedback out of some form of spite and it annoys me. Now, keep writing and dont stop due to my own views on the story. I would rate higher however; {Writing Quality} is a 4/5 stars due to it having pretty good quality writing, however, I recommend some proofreading. {Stability of Updates} is 5/5 stars due to me just starting to read this book today and it says last update 2 days ago so it seems to be ongoing. This cannot be a valid point however. {Story Development} is 3/5 stars because it does have some development in the timeline (I mean strictly timeline), and the concept with the vampire clans is cliche but okay. His rebirth again, cliche but whatever. However, again, looking at how his mother reacted with the werewolves annoys the crap out of me. It is illogical and I understand people react differently when they see the one who murdered their family BUT SHE FUCKING KILLED THEIR FAMILY FIRST AND IS LIKE 'HOW DARE YOU!' Fucking dumbass Xianxia young master vibes and it is pissing me off. {Character Design} is 2/5 stars because he keeps going on and on about his mental health and how he needs to mature compared to his previous life, but it keeps falling back to square 1 on a game of snakes and ladders. {World Background} is 3/5 stars due to you already using a world 'Harry Potter' and making your story from there.