Review Detail of Atlas_Evergreen in Otaku journey!
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You need to work on grammar, I get confused just reading 1 paragraph. At least you included what the character looks like but you contradicted yourself by saying he looks ordinary and then saying he look like a beautiful young teenager.
Otaku journey!
lazy_door
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NiceGuy:well i would be the "good kid" and stop bothering a garmmar nazi then CIAO
EverythingRelevant:I agree but i dont think bad grammer warrants a 2 star right?
Atlas_Evergreen:it does your just to used to reading grammar that's this bad
Hey your not the only one brother or sister Idk, but luckily we can dig our selves out of this trench by reading fics from the mighty cornbringer himself!! So I am her to ask the mighty one to smile upon you less you tread on a path toward a indomitable doom. All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer!
EverythingRelevant:Lol i guess your right I’ve had to adapt to webnovel grammer
Atlas_Evergreen:Hey your not the only one brother or sister Idk, but luckily we can dig our selves out of this trench by reading fics from the mighty cornbringer himself!! So I am her to ask the mighty one to smile upon you less you tread on a path toward a indomitable doom. All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer!
Atlas_Evergreen:Hey your not the only one brother or sister Idk, but luckily we can dig our selves out of this trench by reading fics from the mighty cornbringer himself!! So I am her to ask the mighty one to smile upon you less you tread on a path toward a indomitable doom. All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer! All hail the mighty corn bringer!
EverythingRelevant:Yah i read lord corn’s fics as well. He is definitely a legend
NiceGuy:Stop being an ass for some grammar, the Fanfuc section is not for Grammar Nazis...
NiceGuy:Stop being an ass for some grammar, the Fanfuc section is not for Grammar Nazis...