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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_GgazeliLv103yr
2021-04-08 14:04

it started well but it turned into garbage, first came that old blind man with sacrificial bullshit, I continued to read thinking it would get better but then they kill the MC’s wife, I drank, pure garbage, I should change the name of this work to GAME OF THRONES: UM OLD BLIND WITH FETISH IN KILLING SACRIFIED PEOPLE

Game of Thrones: Rise of the North [Dropped]

YellowScarf
4.6
30 Chs

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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_GgazeliLv10

I knew I would go to shit, who trusts the fucking old man who wants to sacrifice people, then the fucking MC's wife kills me, fucking trash

3yr
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Qwerty_asdf
Qwerty_asdfLv14

Why is sacrifices bad though Old Gods traditionally did human sacrifices and Author just gave some benfits to it

Marcelinho_Ggazeli:I knew I would go to shit, who trusts the fucking old man who wants to sacrifice people, then the fucking MC's wife kills me, fucking trash
3yr
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YellowScarf
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Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4

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Leona_Tremaine
Leona_TremaineLv3

so far good...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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daremetochoosemyna
daremetochoosemynaLv13

1 star on Stability of updates for using cheap tricks to get 15k words. Writing quality seems fine... but you are still on -5k words for first chapter so I will remove 2 stars from this category as well. Story dev. for now it's basically Game of thrones. Not yet creative or unique vibes here. 3 stars. Character design? 1 star. We have MC. Which wasn't really much for design. World background. 1 star. Stolen not modified. At least not yet. I will come back here to check if you improved those aspects and paid your debt for 13k words in first chapter. If you do I will remove this review and post new with better score. Good luck. Winter is cumming.

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Soma_sama
Soma_samaLv3

Overall a very good story so far, with little mistakes. I suggest getting a proof-reader before publishing. ....................................................................................................

3yr
lok_98
lok_98Lv4

I don't have problems with the world background or grammatical errors as it was okay to me .but the main problem is mc.he is contradicting himself a lot.even before getting reincarnated ,he already thinks the canon characters as his.... blood family members.this fic is becoming more and more of a wish fulfilment.yeah fanfiction are wish fulfilment but this story is....just too much.....and I don't have the tolerance to read some of the actions done by the mc...so good luck author.dont read this story if u don't like wish fulfilment mc's

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Leona_Tremaine
Leona_TremaineLv3

so far I love it...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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YellowScarf
YellowScarfAuthor

If you don't start reading immediately, Zurvan will curse YOU!!!! **************************************************************************

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Random531
Random531Lv5

Absolutely love this book and its use of a ck2 system as ut really makes it unique and interesting rather then the generic system most use.

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