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Once_Upon_A_Time
Once_Upon_A_TimeLv43yr
2021-03-16 12:15

The idea of the story is great and all, but the 4 chapters doesn't work and it's kind of weird. You just get straight into the story about death and there isn't much world building or MC character background (maybe present in later chapters). Four chapters isn't enough to give readers a background of the story and garner interest. All four chapters are just depicting the execution a wealthy scum who escaped from the law. I have to say this again, kind of weird. The impression given was that the rest of the story was just going to be like this, execution scenes. Not to be offensive, but it's kind of sick, honestly, not very appetizing or happy to read about. I don't recommend people to read this story. (This review is based off of the first four chapters given)

Livestream: The Adjudicator of Death

Twenty-Eight Peanuts
3.9
287 Chs

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Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

you don't reccomend the novel based on 4 chapters.. This is not to to judge if the novel is good, but if the premise and style is interesting

3yr
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Once_Upon_A_Time
Once_Upon_A_TimeLv4

I already written a disclaimer that this review was based on four chapters. It wasn't like there were anything more at the time. How can I fully determine the premise and style? I can only make do with what I had and what was given. How could I have known whether or not more chapters would come out at a later date and that the book wouldn't become like the rest of the dead books?

Space_Fox:you don't reccomend the novel based on 4 chapters.. This is not to to judge if the novel is good, but if the premise and style is interesting
3yr
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Domn
DomnLv13

So u don't like saw movie?

Once_Upon_A_Time:I already written a disclaimer that this review was based on four chapters. It wasn't like there were anything more at the time. How can I fully determine the premise and style? I can only make do with what I had and what was given. How could I have known whether or not more chapters would come out at a later date and that the book wouldn't become like the rest of the dead books?
3yr
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Once_Upon_A_Time
Once_Upon_A_TimeLv4

Movie?

Domn:So u don't like saw movie?
3yr
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Domn
DomnLv13

Yeah there is a movie called saw have a similar idea

Once_Upon_A_Time:Movie?
3yr
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Once_Upon_A_Time
Once_Upon_A_TimeLv4

I'm pretty sure it is different though. Based on my limited knowledge of Saw, it should be the trapping of participants who play a game of death to escape, I don't think the participants have huge crimes pinned on them and I think they actually had a chance to escape while this novel is just pure death. However, based on what I have read, it does seem somewhat similar.

Domn:Yeah there is a movie called saw have a similar idea
3yr
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NamelessDandelion
NamelessDandelionLv7

Not really? I think Saw was about condemning people who have committed sins. The funny thing about Saw is that you at first don't know what the people have comitted. It gets revealed slowly. Anyways, if you want to read more but don't wanna pay, you can read it in Boxn*vel.com. It has all chapters except the privileged ones. Also, yes I'm censoring because it seems Webnovel censors the whole word of Boxnovel. I really like it, it's very interesting

Once_Upon_A_Time:I'm pretty sure it is different though. Based on my limited knowledge of Saw, it should be the trapping of participants who play a game of death to escape, I don't think the participants have huge crimes pinned on them and I think they actually had a chance to escape while this novel is just pure death. However, based on what I have read, it does seem somewhat similar.
3yr
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FangZheNi
FangZheNiLv14

Only few chapters to free read😅. I'm sorry it's a nice novel but so poor😔😔😔😔

3yr
5
DaoistOG8ke1
DaoistOG8ke1Lv4

105 out of 109 locked (96.33%)

FangZheNi:Only few chapters to free read😅. I'm sorry it's a nice novel but so poor😔😔😔😔
3yr
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DaoistOG8ke1
DaoistOG8ke1Lv4

As of time of writing, the story updates very fast

DaoistOG8ke1:105 out of 109 locked (96.33%)
3yr
Shadow_Gamer1
Shadow_Gamer1Lv4

how can you judge a book on four chapters,jeez

2yr
Deku_Deku_3204
Deku_Deku_3204Lv3

How many chapters are there ? In total...

NamelessDandelion:Not really? I think Saw was about condemning people who have committed sins. The funny thing about Saw is that you at first don't know what the people have comitted. It gets revealed slowly. Anyways, if you want to read more but don't wanna pay, you can read it in Boxn*vel.com. It has all chapters except the privileged ones. Also, yes I'm censoring because it seems Webnovel censors the whole word of Boxnovel. I really like it, it's very interesting
2yr
VXZD_ZD
VXZD_ZDLv4

the conmdeming is exactly what he said

NamelessDandelion:Not really? I think Saw was about condemning people who have committed sins. The funny thing about Saw is that you at first don't know what the people have comitted. It gets revealed slowly. Anyways, if you want to read more but don't wanna pay, you can read it in Boxn*vel.com. It has all chapters except the privileged ones. Also, yes I'm censoring because it seems Webnovel censors the whole word of Boxnovel. I really like it, it's very interesting
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Evelcior
EvelciorLv4

Quick question has custom made demon king been dropped? Anyways this novel is pretty good. The story is kind of like Saw and Death Note mixed together.

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Mark_Muturi_6111
Mark_Muturi_6111Lv13

Amazing... I definitely want to read more...so far it's only four chapters but those chapters are some of the most thrilling ones I've read about... I have to say I'm hooked on this story... I really want to read more on this book The MC looks really interesting and I can't wait to read more on his future escapades... I really like these morally grey types of MC's, not the perfect Gary Stu's or the clichéd villains... I can't wait to see what he will do next In my opinion this book is by far the best pick out of the other nine ones and it should really be picked

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Cat_a_strophic
Cat_a_strophicLv4

low score due the locked chapters after chapter 5, don't know if the author is greedy or something else, but having chaps locked so early on makes keeping up with story hard on a .daily basis, at max one can get 3 free passes, and there are other worth it books that get this passes, I can't possibly invest all only in this book just so I can have enough pleasure reading this chapter.

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hkvleeazn
hkvleeaznLv11

TL;DR book completely and flawedly without effort plagiarized [Death Inquisitor] by [Second Brother] Honestly I read a couple of chapterd and found it oddly familiar, beside for example the way character spoke like “i beg the judge to give them death” or other example like the livestreamer supposedly in New York makes a livestream that reached 40 millions people. Instead of just shortening the original chinese chapters they should have just translated it fully and give it the right novel and author name. just changing stuff there and there but leaving obvious flaws like the use of RMB instead of USD as well. All in all it’s a complete plagiarized book giving neither the original book nor author the fame it deserves.

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Ibuprofen
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Mario_Alonso
Mario_AlonsoLv4

blocked after only 4 chapters. thats a load of bs. so that author doesn't hate me personally, I do these for all novels that black before 40 chapters.

3yr
FBI_LOLI
FBI_LOLILv4

Im rating this with just 2-star because translators just edited this from a chinese novel...Why don't you just guys steal novels from other country?

3yr
KIING
KIINGLv14

I am so annoyed with many of the reviews. People that obviously did not read even one chapter are saying this is a copy of another novel “Death Inquisitor” and that could not be further from the truth. The only thing these two novels have in common is that there is a judge and there is a system. It stops at that. The whole story, characters, goal, etc. are different from one another. This novel is amazing, please read it and support the author.

3yr
Loulounav
LoulounavLv4

Do someone know the mtl or raw of this story ? Do someone know the mtl or raw of this story ? Do someone know the mtl or raw of this story ? Do someone know the mtl or raw of this story ?

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