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2022-03-05 03:49

I got to chapter 5 but I stopped because mc doesn't have any character. You have to build a main character before doing anything else. There are several characters that you can build on. There is the funny character and is characterized by not taking things seriously and being relaxed all the time. There is the lazy character who doesn't like to do anything. It is of no use to him. There is a strong, confident character that makes everyone depend on him, but the character of MC I see it as empty, not comical, lazy or strong. He goes to play with children and says this is the most beautiful moment in his life. This childish character is characterized by all seasoned readers hating her for no reason (Google Translator)

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